[15:20:52] Dear all. I'm a newbie to Wikidata and would like the more experienced members of the community to check a newly created item: https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q130516824 [15:22:52] Check it for what? [15:25:21] Guest8: the descriptions shouldn’t end with a period, see https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Help:Description#Punctuation (AFAIK that also applies to other languages) [15:25:31] and IMHO that description is much longer than it needs to be, “soviet army veteran and chauffeur” would be enough [15:25:43] Sorry, check whether I've used appropriate statements. Particularly Participant in, Occupation, Field of work, Conflict [15:25:52] I just noticed a bug on the display (probably more vector than wikibase, but still)... filed [15:25:55] the “instance of” should just be human, not dead human and (I think) also not WW2 veteran [15:26:09] “dead human” is implied by the date of death already [15:26:24] and “WW2 veteran” probably by ”conflict” [15:28:13] Lucas_WMDE thank you, I've fixed both [15:28:29] actually, regarding the description, I think “Soviet” should be capitalized? not sure [15:28:46] and Chauffeur in German too, as it’s a noun [15:29:20] you got it right that descriptions don’t *have* to start with a capital letter in general (because they’re not full sentences), but it doesn’t have to be forcibly lowercased either :) [15:29:48] the place of death also seems strange to me – if Orkhevi is preferred over Tbilisi (why?), then it should have a reference [15:30:00] and they’re gone :/ [15:33:06] Guest8: welcome back ^^ [15:33:24] you could also use https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Property:P7452 on the preferred-rank “place of death” statement, though it can be tricky to find the right item to use [15:34:09] overall it looks like a pretty decent item to me… some of the qualifiers seem a bit questionable, maybe (but I’m not sure what better ones would look like, it’s just a vague feeling) [15:35:02] I've fixed everything, except the veteran '=D Can't figure out where to place it [15:37:16] Silvan_WMDE Thank you! Just let me know how to improve it :) I'm trying to create a high quality item, because he's a part of my family [15:45:08] Lucas_WMDE Thank you! Just let me know how to improve it  I'm trying to create a high quality item, because he's a part of my family